First render had some problems with light leaking in on the edges, as the walls were only single plane. Once I scoured the internet to find out the problem I went back to the model and fixed this before creating my next render:
We split into groups and presented a couple of A3 pages with our work each, recieving feedback which others would write in the margins of the page. Summarised, the feedback was:
-If its 'Earth meets Water', the earth side of things needs to be more prominent.
-The entranceway is boring. Relate to earth.
-It would be good to have seating down below.
-Having water below the crystal tank confuses the design, change to mirror.
-One person stated that with something like this the would love to be able to walk around and even under it, so the railing should be removed.
-To create further atmosphere, keep the cave below very earthy, dark and moist, like a real cave. Smell of soil.
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